Writing and another Wrapper

Another chapter came back from my editor asking for major changes. It is the first ball and so things that happen at a ball have to happen. I'm so interested in getting to the story that I'm not allowing for specific things I want the reader to know to come out naturally.

 

I've never been good at keeping secrets and it shows in my writing. I want to blab what I know instead of letting it unfold and let the reader discover it on their own. The motto of all good writers is to show instead of tell. I show and then tell. I see a lot of re-writes in my future.

Here's another wrapper along the same lines as the other two. It is not as vibrant as the other two. But to me it looks to me cozy and comfortable.