The first piece of advice was to limit my characters. I had
upwards of thirty.

Then she had me make a chart and based off of the story wrote what
the two main characters' main action was in that chapter. The chart was five
spaces across and four down. At the fifth square on each row there had to be a
main turning point. Something had to change in the story which the character
reacted to and turned the trajectory of the plot in a different direction.
I asked my daughter to make this cloak and then realized that no
one enjoys seeing worn-out clothing.